Hi Shuhan, nice photos. for the indoor and outdoor light I think the light was supposed to be equally inside and outside, and this photo looks like it's all outside light. I also think having the top part of the window out of frame is kind of distracting, and another thing is i am not sure where you were focusing but the dark bars in front kind of look blurry along the edges, but maybe its just my eyes. For the second photo, I like the way you captured the light coming in the window, it kind of shines a spotlight on the the subject which is the stuff on the counter. I think you could have used a more narrow aperture so that everything would be in focus, and maybe bump the ISO up to 400 to compensate. I like your reflection picture, but the dark wall on the right side of the photo is a bit distracting, you could've maybe gotten a bit closer to the mirror. for this one I think you could've maybe used a slightly smaller aperture and blurred more of the foreground. I like picture 4 but it kind of looks off tilt or something, like the angles of the door frame and stuff are all off. the red pole in the background looks like its going into the ceiling at an angle. its a good picture the weird angles are just kind of distracting for me. maybe the background could've been more blurry and I wouldn't have noticed it as much either. For picture 5 nice job with the bright light. it took me a minute to figure out those were stairs and the wall/countertops in the background looked oddly placed, but it made sense when I realized you were on an elevated surface. not much else to say about this one, its a good photo and you did a good job of getting a nice bright day photo.
Hi Shuhan, nice photos. for the indoor and outdoor light I think the light was supposed to be equally inside and outside, and this photo looks like it's all outside light. I also think having the top part of the window out of frame is kind of distracting, and another thing is i am not sure where you were focusing but the dark bars in front kind of look blurry along the edges, but maybe its just my eyes.
ReplyDeleteFor the second photo, I like the way you captured the light coming in the window, it kind of shines a spotlight on the the subject which is the stuff on the counter. I think you could have used a more narrow aperture so that everything would be in focus, and maybe bump the ISO up to 400 to compensate.
I like your reflection picture, but the dark wall on the right side of the photo is a bit distracting, you could've maybe gotten a bit closer to the mirror. for this one I think you could've maybe used a slightly smaller aperture and blurred more of the foreground.
I like picture 4 but it kind of looks off tilt or something, like the angles of the door frame and stuff are all off. the red pole in the background looks like its going into the ceiling at an angle. its a good picture the weird angles are just kind of distracting for me. maybe the background could've been more blurry and I wouldn't have noticed it as much either.
For picture 5 nice job with the bright light. it took me a minute to figure out those were stairs and the wall/countertops in the background looked oddly placed, but it made sense when I realized you were on an elevated surface. not much else to say about this one, its a good photo and you did a good job of getting a nice bright day photo.